this is my summary of the story of the game.
Its dawn and his heart beats down, he tightened his jaw, narrow his eyes,but his stomach is a stormy sea, churning brown and green, spitting up wood in the shore.
This is a good summary of the story you read. Maybe next time you can focus a little bit more on you're spelling. For example: change Narrow to Narrowed. I hope this helps you in the future.
Hi Amusia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good summary of the story you read. Maybe next time you can focus a little bit more on you're spelling. For example: change Narrow to Narrowed. I hope this helps you in the future.
Nice work Amusia I like the way you explained how he felt but maybe you should add capital letter in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteHey Amusia
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you wrote a summary about The game but try remember that you always start a story with a capital letter.
Hey Amusia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you did you cover but next time try to add more pictures. Good Job!